Trembling
Against electricity
And watch it sip
The first rain
As thunder sings
Its Autumn march
Demanding summer
Move along.
© 2011 Pam H. Murray
Comment from PFT:
Hi Pam -
I was going to say I love "watch it sip the first rain," and I do. I reread a few times and it is really the entire poem that is remarkable, wrapped up in Pam Murray's inimitable style. It seems so simple, the way poetry should be, but it contains the thoughtful brush strokes of a fine painter.
love,
Kathy
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